The written word appears to have become the focus for the summer
season line up of special guests at Wintergreen Studios. The majority of
presenters recently have been either writers or poets, which is perhaps
not so surprising since the studio recently entered the realm of
publishing with its Wintergreen Press. The press has put out four titles
to date.
Rena Upitis, founding director and president of Wintergreen, which is
located on Canoe Lake Road just east of Godfrey, said the predominance
of writers for this season just naturally evolved. “We were really lucky
this year to attract four great writers: Steven Heighton and Helen
Humphries of Kingston, poet Patrick Lane and upcoming in September,
Lawrence Hill. We love having writers come and it seems to be just a
growing thing,” she said at the public dinner and reading given by
lauded Canadian poet Patrick Lane on August 24.
Lane, who has no less than 899 poems to his credit, headed up a
four-day poetry workshop at Wintergreen that was attended by 12 eager
poets. Louise Carson from St. Lazare, Québec, explained what Patrick had
stressed so far in the workshop. “We worked on punctuation, which can
often be a huge bug-bear for poets. But what he seems to be focusing on
is relating the concrete to the abstract and getting us to understand
that how, if you go too far in one direction or the other, you can
either overstate or over mystify the reader. The idea is to get that
balance and to use the concrete as a way to underline the abstract,”
Carson said.
Lane is a master poet who has been practicing his craft for over 50
years and who has achieved that magical balance. His most recent
collection called “Witness-Selected Poems-1962-2010” won the Governor
General’s Award for Poetry and is a testament to the fact that he knows
of what he speaks. His poems brought forth gasps from the audience who
seemed to hang on his every word.
Lane opened the evening with a poem called “The Mad Boy”, an account
of a developmentally challenged young man who lived down the street from
him and who Lane would often see escaping from his caregivers. “As he
goes he keeps looking back at his pursuers who follow him into the
light, in the boy’s face is both glee and terror, he knows they will
catch him, they always do…and the boy will wait for them just short of
where the road breaks, and now he is happy as they hold him in their
hands. He laughs at the run he has made again, his face lifted up into
the sun reflects the knowledge he knows is his, that for him, the only
escape is surrender, that giving himself up is his whole life…”
Lane ended his reading with a poem he read by heart called Antelope
in the Snow. It came from an event in which he said he had in his
“classic Patrick Lane way", endangered his own life, the life of his
wife, and the lives of a herd of antelope by making a car trip on a
fiercely cold day in the prairies many years before. Temperatures had
dipped to below -40 degrees Celsius, and Lane described how he got out
of his car and disturbed a group of concentrically circled antelopes,
who unbeknownst to him were in a protective formation to shield them
from the cold. They scattered when he ventured too close. “I felt
terrible about that incident for a long time but not so much anymore.”
The poem reads, “This too the antelope in snow. Is it enough to say
we will imagine this and nothing more? Who understands that failing,
falters at the song. And still we sing, that is beauty. But it is not an
answer anymore than the antelope, most slender of beasts, most
beautiful, will tell us why we go, going nowhere, and going there
perfectly in the snow.”
Lane’s advice to poets: “Read. Good writing comes out of good
reading. Good readers make good writers. Really good writers are writers
who have read a great deal and who have come out of a great tradition.”
For those wanting more of that tradition, Lawrence Hill, author of The Book Of Negroes, will be leading a
workshop at Wintergreen from September 14-17. There will be a dinner and
public reading on September 15 at 6pm. For information visit
www.wintergreensdtudios.ca or call Wintergreen Studios at 613-273-8745.
From Louise Carson, 2019:
ReplyDeleteI remember one big thing I got from Patrick. He gave us permission to write about anything.
And two smaller things. First, don't worry about line length, as in, making each line the same length as the others. Second, when in doubt, stick in a comma.
Others attending might have their own experiences to share. Two of the attendees are league members that I know. Lesley Strutt and Lynn Tait.